Hello everyone.I am very happy to seeing you.
My name is *** .I am junior. I went to this school in 2009 so I have studied two more years English than you at school.
This is your third lesson of spoken english class, I think you are getting along with your English teacher well,she was my spoken English teacher too. She is very good at English especially spoken English ,so you can count on her,and follow her you will speak good excellent English ,
Because I am older than you ,so I would like to share with you my two years of learning experience,and give you some suggestions.

First,I want you to think about a question :how to use your time well, It is very serious. you know everyone have equal time.24hs a day. the man who use his time well ,they can learn more and do better job than others,I wish you wonld not waste your time. Use your time well and study never-ending,you will make a big progress.

Third, let`s talking about learning English.as a student who learn language, my advice would be to spend more time to spend more time to focus on listening skill and spoken English.because, the purpose of language is to communicate. We use English to make friends talk to customers, understand movies,and participate in business meeting. It`s really involves the ability about listening and speaking.

建议my name is **, a junior student.
Went to改为entered 或 came into或 enrolled in
This is your third spoken english class就好，感觉lesson of 不需要。之后直接用Hope you are getting along可能比较好。
She is especially good at spoken English,so you can count on her to help you excelin this subject
Being more senior than you, I would like to share with you my two-year learning experience with some suggestions.


时间过得真快，记得刚上大学的时候，大三的学长学姐们来指导我们的学习，给我们建议，那个时候，觉得他们好厉害，他们的实力很强，各方面都非常棒，一转眼，我们也已经是大三的学生了，对于学生，生活各方面，也颇有心得，轮到我们去给学弟学妹们传授经验了，哈哈，原来世上的事情就是如此，我们不断地努力，不断地前进，原来看似高不可攀的事情，现在也许已经踩在我们的脚下，成为我们进步的台阶。每当看到那些功成名的人站在台上挥洒自如的讲话，我想，也许当我到了那个年纪，有了那样的阅历，那样的经验，我也会做的更好，那么，现在我所需要做的就是不断地努力！

First of all,I recommend you to think about a question: how to use your time well.This is really important; in fact, everyone has the equal amount of time. Therefore, whoever uses his or her time better than the others will learn more and achievea higher goal. I wish you would use your time effeciently and study never-endingly.You will definitely make a big progress.


谢谢，有几个地方改的比原来的好多了，当时没想到！

Therefore
efficiently
definitely
这三个词用的太好了，哎呀，我的积极词汇太少了，写的时候居然想不起来这些词！
谢谢~~

Next, let`s talk/discuss about learning English. As a student who studies this foreign language, my advice to you is to put more efforts in oral English. A main reason is that the ultimate purpose of learning a language is to communicate. With fluent spoken English, we can make western friends, chat with foreign customers(tourist?), understand English movies better, and participate in international business meetings. In fact this really requires the ability of listening and speaking.


Last but not least, besides listening and speaking, another major contributor to learning English is: reading. This is an effective way to expand your vocabulary and help you understand sentences' patterns. It can therefore improve your skill in spoken English. You really need to read a lot of English articles in order to be accustomed to the language.
At the beginning, maybe you could simply understand sentence by sentence. But as you make further progress, you would start comprehending paragraphs, short stories,and eventually, even books can be a piece of cake. So start reading today. Perhapsone year later you would find yourself understanding an English novel with no trouble at all.


大概就这样吧。演讲稿么？