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来了来了，其实露珠文笔不错可是……标点符号什么的注意一下双引号是“”不是””【←揍她
然后……剧情转换神跳转细节描写求细致就这些【踹
然后顶一个继续潜QUQ

来啦~

文啊文！楼主，以后再文要@偶啊!

思考中……我还是支持金铃的……因为壹铃啥的有一毛钱不搭啊!

”呵呵，金格，幻碧风玲！”诺雨冷笑，轻声喝到。风铃声在淡淡的浅黄色魔光中响起，风铃------”什么鬼玩意儿？”金格些许吃惊，看”戏”的众人看过去-----那是一个小小的女孩，扎着绿色的卷卷的辫子，一双并不大的黄绿眼精充满了怒色。”喂！有点素养好吗？我不是鬼玩意儿，ok？”女孩的上衣是五个铃铛拼成的，露着白白的肚皮，下身则是一朵铃铛花，裸着肥肥的脚丫。这时，诺雨轻轻唤道：”晰儿”立刻，女孩柔柔的在竖琴声的伴奏下唱起一首歌来......greatest as you
smallest as me
you show me what is deep as sea
a little love
a little kiss
a little heart
a little give
all of little something
these are memories
you make me cry
make me smile
make me feel the love is ture
you always stand by my side
i don't want to say goodbye
you make me cry
make me smile
make me feel the joy of lover
kissing you
thank you for all the love
you always gave to me
oh i love you
greatest as you
smallest as me
you show me what is deep as sea
a little love
a little kiss
a little heart
a little give
all of little something
these are memories
you make me cry
make me smile
make me feel the love is ture
you always stand by my side
i don't want to say goodbye
you make me cry
make me smile
make me feel the joy of lover
kissing you
thank you for all the love
you always gave to me
oh i love you
yes i do
how you always do
make me cry
make me smile
make me feel the love is ture
you always stand by my side
i don't want to say goodbye
you make me cry
make me smile
make me feel the joy of lover
kissing you
thank you for all the love
you always gave to me
oh i love you
to be with you
oh i love you

@LINDA135793 @斩不开纠葛 @浅夏幽儿 @可恶的蒜苗 @紫音璇 @abbiny @贝娜贝妮

全英文，没看懂！

@夜樱铃love

各位，很抱歉，今天好想睡觉，就不发了〜明天发三张哈，一天一更，周末一天两更哦〜

没。。。没看懂

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文！！小雨快更文。。。。