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（就是个柱状图的作文，要求1：描述图表。2.给出自己评论。字数：150字）
The bar chart above clearly shows some significant changes have taken place in China's domestic private cars market.According to the gragh,the share of domestic brands went up from a quarter in 2008 to approximately 35% in 2009,which is on the top of the thress items.Meantime, the market percentage of japanese cars experienced a 8% drop to 25% in 2009. In comparison,the share of American cars remained almost steady during the same perid.
There are some possible factors responsible for the phenomenon.At the top of the list,the increase of Chinese cars'share can be seen as a response to the rapid development of the Chinese auto industry.In addition, there is no denying that the technical gap between China and developed contries is narrowing at a unprecedented rate.Finally,due policies established by government also contribute to the proseprity in the automobile market.
As is discussed above,it is no surprise to this phenomenon and there are full reasons to hope that the thrive of Chinese cars will coninue in the years ahead.
（就是个柱状图的作文，要求1：描述图表。2.给出自己评论。字数：150字）
The bar chart above clearly shows some significant changes have taken place in China's domestic private cars market.According to the gragh,the share of domestic brands went up from a quarter in 2008 to approximately 35% in 2009,which is on the top of the thress items.Meantime, the market percentage of japanese cars experienced a 8% drop to 25% in 2009. In comparison,the share of American cars remained almost steady during the same perid.
There are some possible factors responsible for the phenomenon.At the top of the list,the increase of Chinese cars'share can be seen as a response to the rapid development of the Chinese auto industry.In addition, there is no denying that the technical gap between China and developed contries is narrowing at a unprecedented rate.Finally,due policies established by government also contribute to the proseprity in the automobile market.
As is discussed above,it is no surprise to this phenomenon and there are full reasons to hope that the thrive of Chinese cars will coninue in the years ahead.
