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这句话,是不是有点别扭。

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With the ever-accelerating economic growth, which provides more opportunities for Chinese students who aspire to enrich their learning experience to have higher academic achievement.


IP属地:上海来自Android客户端1楼2023-04-04 16:37回复
    随着经济的不断加速发展,这为中国学生提供了更多的机会,他们渴望丰富自己的学习经验,以获得更高的学术成就。
    就是这句话怎么用高级一点的句式表达出来


    IP属地:上海来自Android客户端2楼2023-04-04 16:38
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      2025-07-20 08:41:41
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      The ever-accelerating economic growth provides more opportunities for Chinese students who aspire to enrich their learning experience to narrow the gap between the promise of their ideal and the reality of their time.


      IP属地:河南3楼2023-04-04 17:09
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        我咋看不出是句子捏?


        IP属地:中国台湾4楼2023-04-04 19:37
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          With the continuous acceleration of economic growth, it provides more opportunities for China students who are eager to enrich their learning experience, so as to achieve higher academic achievements.


          来自Android客户端5楼2023-04-05 01:27
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            The rapidly-developing Economy offered more opportunities to Chinese students for them to enrich learning experience so as to attain a higher achievement .


            IP属地:辽宁来自Android客户端6楼2023-04-05 10:04
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              如果是要表达这种意思,可以用更简单一些的句子。我的个人建议是,一般写作不要追求“繁复的高级”,能精炼者莫赘述,除非是文学创作或者其他你觉得非要卖弄辞藻的情况。如果这句话我来写:Economic growth creates opportunities for students to enrich their learning experience for higher academic achievements.


              IP属地:上海来自Android客户端7楼2023-04-05 10:53
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                这句话谁是主语


                IP属地:黑龙江来自Android客户端8楼2023-04-05 11:27
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                  2025-07-20 08:35:41
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                  这句话没有谓语动词啊。楼主想表达什么意思呢?要是我写可能会写成这样:
                  The ever-accelerating economic growth provides more opportunities for Chinese students aspiring to enrich their learning experience for higher academic achievement.
                  这里提一句个人感觉higher这里是多余的。而且我也很少见到用high形容achievement的。不知道有没有人有更好的建议。


                  IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端9楼2023-04-05 13:21
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                    你这句话主谓宾都没有


                    IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端10楼2023-04-05 17:20
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                      你句子呢?


                      IP属地:吉林来自Android客户端11楼2023-04-06 11:12
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